Analysis of We Cry Together
Frederick Joseph 1989 (Yonkers)
We Cry Together
Her shriek is raw, snapping all the world’s quiet
As dreams, unborn, tumble into the abyss of almost.
I don’t know this sound; an anguish that pierces my soul.
With what little strength I have, I grab her hand,
Weaving through the grooves of her sorrow,
Though my grip is frail.
The geography of her face is foreign to me,
As the doctor explains the terrain of a pain
I cannot mend. A black hole I cannot save her from.
Nah, this can’t be right. Look again! Refusing to accept my wife’s body,
As the site of such an inexplicable vanishing—
A promise left lingering in the world of daydreams.
She asks me and the doctor to leave the room,
Needing a moment to plead with the universe.
From the hallway, I hear her sobbing, an ocean devouring her smile.
My knuckles meet the steel door of a sterile hospital room,
Attempting to punch away our misfortune, until I can replace it
With something she actually deserves. For all of the IVF shots,
The nights we debated over names, the anxiety attacks about money,
And the moments we pinched ourselves at the idea of being chosen
by Saadiq. Saadiq Joseph.
How do you stitch a wound living in the syllables of a name never called?
There is nothing to say, when spun into a vortex of unspeakable loss.
We spend weeks huddled around grief like a campfire,
Telling silent ghost stories about the people we stopped being
Just days before. Nurturing a flame so small it could be mistaken
for hope.
In the most somber hours, when the world took its deepest breath,
I sat beside her, staring at the slight crescent of her unhoused belly,
For so long, I swore I heard a heartbeat, but it was actually planets collapsing
In the cavities of my chest. And I wondered, how are we going to survive this,
And in time, my question was answered: Together.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11010 01111010110 1111100100111 111111101111 11101111101 101011010 11111 0010010111011 101001001101 1101011110101 111111010101011110 1011110100100 010110000111 11100101101 10010111010 10111010110010001 11010111010101 010110110010011111 110110001111011 01101010100100010110 0010110011001011010 11110 1111011000100101101 1110111101010101001 111100111010 1010110010101110 11011000111111010 11 001101010111101 11010101011010110 11111110111110010010 001001110110111101011 001110110010 |
Closest metre | Iambic heptameter |
Characters | 1,825 |
Words | 359 |
Sentences | 19 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 12, 9, 6, 5 |
Lines Amount | 33 |
Letters per line (avg) | 43 |
Words per line (avg) | 10 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 283 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 66 |
About this poem
I am shattered by the gut-wrenching cry of my wife. She is faced with a profound loss, the details of which are being presented by a doctor — one that I refuse to accept.
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