Analysis of Heavens Kiss

Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)



A sidewards glance, as if
by chance

A drop of water

Caught between tides
of greater things

While eddies within currents
Throughout the universe

impel energies to oceans
of universal flow

like sailing ships
going dimensions

seismic drift
through empty spaces

Dance stars to life
Kindled by the divine

To spontaneously ignite
Providing Light

through which we as
An expression

of herds of camels
passing

through the eye
of a needle

seek answers
to questions

Not yet asked

As if Tasked
to find

much deeper
worlds to explore

It takes more
than any one of us

As extensions
of creative energy

Like the wind
projecting itself

through this
human expression.

i /we of many memories
repeat the pursuit

of the nature of Life

skipping stones across time

traveling to new worlds
between active memories

Many souls
speaking directly through Us

In the spirit pool
directly through dreams

In waves like ripples,
bending light/time/space

through our experience
Our existential signature

As the double helix
of our divine nature

continues to unwind
In this dimensional shift

In this capsule
of time-expression

In effort to achieve
a viable connection

Come full circle

To pour back through
our Souls Source

Our Spirits projecting
our will

to be spoken
to our minds

Copyright ©2023 CEF2


Scheme AX B XX XX CX XC DX EX FF XG HI XJ XC K KL BM MN CX LX XG OX E X XO XN XX HX XB XB LD JG XG J XX IX GX A
Poetic Form
Metre 01111 11 01110 1011 1101 1100110 01010 01100110 10101 1101 10010 101 11010 1111 101001 10100001 0101 1111 1010 11110 10 101 1010 110 110 111 111 11 110 1101 111 110111 1010 1010100 101 01001 11 10010 11110100 01001 101011 101011 100111 0110100 101 1001011 00101 01011 01110 10111 1100100 1010100 101010 1100110 010101 0101001 0110 11010 010101 0100010 1110 1111 1011 1010010 101 1110 1101 101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 1,445
Words 328
Sentences 3
Stanzas 37
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 68
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 28
Words per stanza (avg) 6
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Written on September 10, 2023

Submitted by Charles2 on September 10, 2023

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