Analysis of Synergistic

Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)



With Love Emotion
suggesting

Bonds stronger than
mere presence of mind

Soul-seeking
Raised to the power of Will
Rather than surrender

Finding alternative
means of expression

While remaining true
to source

Bending time
Parting space

As Moses parting the Red Sea

Counting each our many blessings
While the worldly spin the dice

Never thinking twice

Playing the role
Of high rollers

from low places

Until the tests of time
expose their errors

Faster than their pencils
can invent tools

to circumvent time

Even greater than erasers
can change minds

Faster
than the pace

which they recreate fallen empires.

Only to find themselves
helpless to redirect

the elliptical sweep
of the universe back and forth

As the pendulum, gathering momentum
transverses infinite depths

Spontaneously opens
a portal within our minds

Without the slightest distraction
Indecision, or Hesitation

As we walk within
Holding our breath

Cheat spiritual death
Our souls seeking honor

In approach to glory
from one moment to the next

In alternate dimensions
Breathe beneath water

Not only without getting wet
Not even holding our breath

Make music
between silent rooms

Procreate
even without Sex

No wonder we
refer to one another

As lovers Of life/light
Deeper than exes

Fathers and mothers
Daughters and sons

Sisters and brothers

Rather than Losing spirit
Each to walk our own path

Maintaining @our core
spiritual parity

Sharing a dream
never getting bored

or being senselessly  
caught in the extremes

beyond Merely
living in Peace

Progressing further
in understanding

than
ever suggesting

Even the
need for War

Possessing a divine Love
deeper than the “ i Dream”

Pursuing sweeter emotions

Showing more devotion
To those we love

Ever before
beyond our means

Working closer
Rather than falling apart

Seems even more fruitful
To free fall back

To the source

While Beaming
Together

Copyright ©2023 CEF2


Scheme AB CX BDE FA XG HI J XK K XL X HL XX H LM EI L XX XX XX NM AA XO OE JX NE XO XX XX JE XX LN L XX PJ QX DX JX EB CB XP RQ N AR PX EX XX G BE F
Poetic Form
Metre 11010 010 1101 11011 110 1101011 101010 100100 11010 10101 11 101 101 11010011 101101010 1010101 10101 1001 1110 1110 010111 01110 101110 1011 1011 10101010 111 10 101 111010100 101101 10101 001001 1010101 10100100010 11001 0100010 01001101 01010010 00101010 11101 10101 110001 1011010 001110 1110101 0100010 10110 11001101 11010101 110 01101 101 10011 1101 0111010 110111 10110 10010 1001 10010 1011010 1111011 010101 1000100 1001 10101 1101 10001 0110 1001 01010 0010 1 10010 100 111 0100011 101011 01010010 101010 1111 1001 01101 1010 1011001 110110 1111 101 110 010 101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 2,021
Words 432
Sentences 2
Stanzas 50
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 3, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 1
Lines Amount 92
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 31
Words per stanza (avg) 6
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Written on 2018

Submitted by Charles2 on September 11, 2023

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