Analysis of Tapestries



Best wishes, bountiful blessings
Good faith and fortunes flow

fully To sail ever so free

Between you and i

without much doubt
Exists a chemistry

which brings about awareness…
Changing perspectives of mind

With miraculous
healing energies

Which shake me up,
sets me down easy

Turns my key
spins me around,

Although it’s so inspiring
to be loved

Just to believe in you
so faithfully

Moves me further than

i would imagine ever …
Emotions could exist

It is beautiful seeing
that you care enough …

to share a joyful wish
even …

Halfway around the world
and back

To be so understanding
and concerned

To show
what you feel is true…

You are so truly beautiful
 i cannot help

But inviting you
inside my dreams…

In my aloneness
searching out a clue

For what i have observed,
voices heard…

felt within my life
leading me thru adversities,

Despite my weakness
onto a course of destiny

Where more than only dreams
come true…

As life leads, follows,
dips, and bends time

Its trends move our consciousness…
Swaying our worlds gently in its wake

As we are swept by,
whisperings of sweet memories

Bent like willows in the wind
 subtly reminding us

that we are not alone,
someone cares in this life

A joyful wish bringing back to me
A prayer of hope which i cannot deny in truth

The attraction that i feel for you
comes spiritually…

So, freed again to rise and walk
The pathway of choices

with songs of love
Thinking of a friend in time

Forever on my heart of mind…

Tidal rhythms of consciousness

In waves which gently rise, curl,
toss and turn, swirl

Rolling towards
the distant horizons

then drifting further
continuing throughout all Eternity…

A painted picture
fills my mind with love vibrations

Moods and memories envelope me
…Boosting my spirits

mellowing my perspectives
Imparting upon me a quiet wisdom…

Touching so very deeply
thoughts of loving tenderness

Moving thru my mind
with warmth and energy

Into such a dreamy restful peace

I begin to glow
with a sense of calm and ease…
…pure ecstasy,

moving my spirit so when we meet
Again, to dance in celebration

of a joyful wish

A secret rendezvous
for a spiritual romance…

Where inner visions play beside you
as thoughts,

Overflow imaginary boundaries
in such manner

which eludes
premeditative self-reflection

In directions, which reveals more
than mere words

Or casually spoken expressions

Could never ever begin to convey
Nevertheless, here i am …again,

trying desperately to send
this telepathic …message to you

The reception in my mind today
is so cloudy

With this inverse brainstorm
brewing…

I cannot tell down from up
However, before all my spares are flats,

Forgetting how to tie my shoes

I will draw upon the marker i have
From the creator,

submit myself to do his will
But now my focus on you

has begun to clear it up
Therefore, i will take a chill pill

(And save the marker for a rainy day)

So, if i choose
to ignore the daily news

forgive me, i have,
sometimes to make

elemental choices
to reestablish my bearings

Calling upon the menagerie
of my cultural heritage

To expend in effort
to outlast these blues

Do not play so harshly
with your dreams, my friend

So please, hear me now,
we all have need

To let our spirits,
rise gently into play

In your heart,
you know the truth

To melt into a starlit stream
Bathing in communion spiritually

with a beautiful friend
who moves me so completely

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Scheme AB C D XC EF EG HC CX IX JC X KX IL MX XX IX BJ XX JN AJ XX OA EC NJ XP EQ DG FE XO CR JC XS XP F E TT XU KC KU CV XX CE FC X BGC XW M JX JX GK XW XX U XX YJ XC XI HX Z 1 K 2 J H2 X ZZ 1 Q SA CX XZ CY XX VX XR XC YC L
Poetic Form
Metre 11010010 110101 10111011 01101 0111 010100 1101010 1001011 10100 10100 1111 11110 111 1101 111010 111 110101 1100 11101 1101010 010101 1110010 11101 110101 10 110101 01 111010 001 11 11111 11110100 1101 10101 0111 011 10101 111101 101 10111 10111 01110 10011100 111101 11 11110 1011 1 11110100 1010110011 11111 111100 111001 1000101 111101 11011 010110111 011111100101 001011111 110000 11011101 01110 1111 1010101 01011111 10101100 0111011 1011 1001 010010 11010 01000110100 01010 11111010 10100101 10110 1001010 01001101010 1011010 1110100 1 10111 110100 011010101 10111 1011101 1100 101101111 01110010 10101 01010 10100001 110101011 11 100100100 0110 101 11010 1 00101011 111 1100010010 1101001101 00111101 10100011 10101011 001001101 1110 11011 10 1101111 100111111 01011111 1110101011 10010 0111111 1111011 1011111 1111011 0101010101 1111 1010101 1 01111 0111 1 01010 10010110 100100100 11100100 101010 1111 111110 11111 1 11111 1111 111010 110011 011 1101 1 11010101 10001010000 101001 1111010 101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 3,616
Words 749
Sentences 1
Stanzas 68
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 5, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 5, 1, 3, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 5, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 8, 2, 2, 5, 2, 5, 2, 1
Lines Amount 147
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 40
Words per stanza (avg) 9
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Submitted by Charles2 on September 14, 2023

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