Analysis of It looks like rain
Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)
Early today, bright this morning
just after i awoke
Washed my face, brushed my teeth
Sung to the amusement of the mirror
A song about a sweet relationship
i once had
As i shave away
yesterday’s growth,
while my hurt Feelings
sent me reeling,
in all
which it evoked
Stepped outside
to catch a smoke
Observed
a glorious sunrise unfolding,
A new opportunity
with something new,
Arriving over the horizon.
i felt ready for a new start,
come what may
Although, i had a funny feeling
This was not just going to be
Just another ordinary day
Gazing to the skies,
thin wispy clouds
Concentrations
of frozen condensation
Gathering in ever increasing
mass of random collections
of majestic floating
islands on parade
Building bolder, thicker, stronger
every moment
As darkening shadows
faded from white to gray
Gather deeper
as the skies become enraged
Distant lightning
flashes its dire warning
With thunder
chasing clouds further ahead
A strong wind falls
suddenly upon us
Scattering leaves,
every which way...
Smell a cool,
dampness in the air
Birds flying low,
seeking shelter
Sleeping street lights,
stagger back to life
Umbrellas
suddenly appear.
Seems like, Another
good day
to make the juke box Fill the air
with music of yesterdays
To fill the void with memories
Step away from this reality
Enjoy a beer or three
With a friend
i haven’t met
It looks like
rain
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Metre | 10011110 110101 111111 1100101010 010101010 111 11101 101 11110 1110 01 1101 111 1101 01 01001010 010100 1101 010100010 11101011 111 11101010 11111011 10101001 10101 1101 010 110010 100010010 1110010 101010 10101 10101010 10010 11001 101111 1010 1010101 1010 101110 110 1011001 0111 100011 1001 10011 101 10001 1101 1010 1011 10111 010 10001 11010 11 11011101 110110 11011100 1011110 010111 101 111 111 1 101 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 1,470 |
Words | 318 |
Sentences | 4 |
Stanzas | 35 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1 |
Lines Amount | 66 |
Letters per line (avg) | 17 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 32 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 7 |
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