Analysis of Shards

Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)



Broken Bits of glass

Remnants of another's
piece of history

A broken bottle on a playground
Sadly cast aside

Be cautious
where you step

Meaningful dreams
live here

Share a moment
everyday

And a smile
celebrating life

Have a puddle party

Let's splash and play
While there's still daylight

becomes
another world
at night

As all too often

we lead our lives
compartmented in our private flowing pools

Our bodies push pulled along
Within the mainstream

Amidst echoes of life

Touched by this reality
together But at what cost

As a life nearby
is bled indiscriminately

As we continue on Living
despite the loss

Copyright ©2023 CEF2


Scheme X XA XX XX XX XB XC A BD XXD X XX XX C AX XA XX C
Poetic Form
Metre 10111 101010 11100 01010101 10101 110 111 1001 11 1010 101 001 1001 101010 1101 1111 01 0101 11 11110 11101 101010101 10101101 0101 011011 11110 0101111 10111 1101000 11010110 0101 101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 721
Words 170
Sentences 2
Stanzas 18
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 3, 1, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 29
Words per stanza (avg) 6
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Submitted by Charles2 on September 21, 2023

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