Analysis of She awakes to uncertainty

Richard J Edwards 1960 (Ft Belvoir)



In the winter of the night there is a mystic that has surrounded the land. There is no safe haven as we look and feel for the truth. The words of a man often don't match his actions. Why has he lost his grip on reality.  Does he need a map to find his way back. As the night grows colder the darkness in the house makes her tremble for it appears the shadows make the cabinet doors look like they are dancing. Is that the cat scratching on the door? If so why is he on the couch. Two hours to sunrise she wonders how she'll make it.


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Characters 532
Words 109
Sentences 9
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 412
Words per line (avg) 110
Letters per stanza (avg) 412
Words per stanza (avg) 110

About this poem

It's about the time of a winter night in one's cabin way out in the woods.

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Written on September 23, 2023

Submitted by rjenavy on September 23, 2023

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Richard J Edwards

Retired Navy. Live in Montana. And Love God. In 2004 I wrote and had published by poetry. Com The Truth Of Heart and Soul put in their book "Involving the Muse". This is not my best work. I have 40yrs of writings I know R publish worthy I'm just looking for some to help that knows how to do that. I'm a common man and I believe my writings R easily relatable. more…

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