Analysis of My Fortress



The Lord is my shining light,
He’s also my salvation;
I aim to please in His sight,
Being His new creation.

He’s the stronghold of my life,
Of whom shall I be afraid;
Amongst the toil and strife,
I will never be dismayed.

Evildoers assail me,
But they come stumble and fall;
For they are too blind to see,
The Lord has answered my call.

My foes encamp against me,
But my heart will never fear;
Because the Lord heard my plea,
And I know that He is near.

Although against me war shall rise,
Yet I shall be confident;
For the Lord has made me wise,
As He made me vigilant.

One thing I ask of the Lord,
In His house that I do dwell;
My request is not ignored,
Avoiding the gates of hell.

For the beauty of the Lord,
Reflects upon His temple;
While those in one accord,
Will be His chosen people.

He hides me under His wing,
In the day there is trouble;
To His righteousness, I cling,
Not to falter or stumble.

He conceals me from their view,
Then lifts me high on the rock;
My spirit He does renew,
For beside me, He will walk.

Copyright ©2023 Richard Newton Sherrer


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,077
Words 252
Sentences 10
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 37
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 82
Words per stanza (avg) 21

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The LORD Is My Light and My Salvation Psalm 27:1-5

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Written on September 25, 2023

Submitted by richardnsherrer on September 24, 2023

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Richard Newton Sherrer

I was born and raised on a farm in Pennsylvania. It was a small family farm that was handed down through 8 generations of Sherrer men until my father; Newton just could not make a living from it any longer. He thought that I would make a better living away from the farm. So, I decided to join the Air Force in 1969 upon graduating from high school. I gained quite a bit of experience and insight on life while in the service. Even though I was only stationed on the east coast of the US, my Air Force career took me to Germany and Korea. After 20 years wearing of the blue uniform, I decided going in a different direction and found myself becoming very diverse in many different fields. Something still seemed missing to me after being separated from the service for about 10 years. The Air Force was a way of life for me, but really missed life in Korea. I found myself changing careers again. Poetry was an interest of his since my days in high school. With returning to the Lord, I felt motivated to write of my Christian beliefs. I started looking at Bible verses and reflecting on my own personal experiences. The Bible was found to be as true today as to when the various books were written. I could see much of what the Bible is teaching us as valid as every in modern time. It felt only natural to me on using his personal experience based on Bible verses and see much of my own life written in the Scriptures. God inspires me what to write about though. I do not claim to be an expert on God or the Bible. I am just a Christian who has become enlightened to write poetic verses from the Holy Scriptures. more…

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