Analysis of Where love reigns …with relativity
Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)
As we stand here together and apart
in attempt To live again
with energy enough to solve this gap
In our awareness of ourselves,
basking in love’s light.
A map to pursue the greatest of life’s mysteries
as we imprint our moments trail,
footprints in the sand
As written in the only language
which anyone who has ever loved or been loved
with minds which understand
the demands of living,
written as raindrops,
revolving patterns of being,
transforming upon expression,
each spark of life,
every moment a life design
being projected, creating waves
which enfold us all
as we embrace one another,
slowly spinning as we fall
In and out of loves trance,
begin tearing down walls
that keep us close, yet so far apart,
that as we teach each other to love,
merging minds anew as we return and start.
Each of us one step removed
from our last broken heart.
Returning from the crime scene
of past mistakes,
leaving small impressions,
minute imperfections...
As we try to recover.
We dream of starlit nights.
Working to get love’s magic
happening again, right from the very start,
find happiness comes naturally and free
if we pay the admission price…
to freely share the ultimate
intimate responsibility,
falling smoothly in place,
counting our blessings twice.
Feeling good vibes, we can almost taste,
so touched, resonating by being nice
calling new dimensions into being
in our wake against the ever changing new horizons
by each new step we take,
we sing loves song…
in aural echoes across astral plains,
forever passing in review
pulsating waves within the constant ebb and rise
of our emotions given life…
cast adrift, almost as leaves driven by the winds,
tossing churning, swept along leading our emotions
to drift on starlight tides
Deep reflections of our most treasured
moments of bliss spent through creation
what some believe as just myths,
being lost/found
in thoughts nearest,
dearest to our hearts,
putting together pieces to the puzzle,
knowing we, each must play a part,
sharing special moments
with open hearts,
not just biding time…
remembering,
with a pulse and glow
as simple as a kiss and a smile
as if to know…
when we provide
one another love,
despite our need to share
the inspiration to succeed,
we elevate our senses
into the heavens
of what’s most buoyant
On our minds,
converging
into the flow, sublime
Pouring into life streams,
Unbound by space and time
with passions flow,
Collections of our dreams,
Remnants of the Creator’s way
to provide us all The will
in our prayers call
for All
we will ever need
ignite our souls
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Metre | 1111010001 0011101 1100011111 0100101001 10011 0110101011100 110110101 1001 110001010 11011101111 11101 001110 1011 01010110 01001010 1111 100100101 100100101 10111 11011010 1010111 001111 011011 111111101 111111011 10101110101 1111101 1101101 0101011 1101 101010 10010 1111010 111101 1011110 10001110101 11001100001 11100101 11010100 10000100 101001 1010101 10111111 111001101 1010100110 010101010101010 111111 1111 0101001101 0101001 10101010101 110010101 10111110101 10101011010010 11111 1010110110 101111010 1101111 1011 0110 101101 10010101010 10111101 101010 1101 11101 0100 10101 110101001 1111 1101 10101 0110111 0010101 1101010 01010 10110 1101 010 010101 100111 011101 1101 0101101 10100101 1011101 01011 11 11101 01101 101 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 2,739 |
Words | 584 |
Sentences | 8 |
Stanzas | 51 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 91 |
Letters per line (avg) | 23 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 40 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 9 |
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