Analysis of 29

HL 2003 (Casablanca)



The painful reminder that I’m not dead.
Inked on my flesh, a butterfly tattoo carved on my vein, stabbed in my brain.
A sweet relief for an endless crash of anxiety as soon as I bleed.
The red gush calms my brain, soothes my mind as I yell out in pain, my screams echoing the very life seeping out of my skin.
But one time isn’t enough, just like an addict, each night I remind myself that I deserve to live, Despite my pain.


Scheme ABCDB
Poetic Form
Metre 0100101111 11110100111111011 0101111011010011111 011111111111101111000101101111 111101111011110111101110111
Characters 429
Words 88
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 5
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 66
Words per line (avg) 17
Letters per stanza (avg) 328
Words per stanza (avg) 84

About this poem

It is a small poem that talks about self-harm.

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Written on September 09, 2023

Submitted by louh.hadil on September 13, 2023

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Born in a second world country, then moved to a first world country. I write mostly about my own thoughts and personal experience. more…

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