Analysis of Carrot
Lose your freedom
Obey your orders
Live under a god
Who does not love you
Things I shouldn't do
That you say I really should
Do evil
To see the good
Wrestle angels
Making you responsible
For nothing
Until you die from it
"No more pain" she said
And god listened
But I'm not sure what he did
The madness
When you feel you must
Something you know you should not
Because you cannot choose
Over what the god chooses for you
You are so obsessed
With making things
More what
They already are
I think You might
Forget what it is
To be weird
His rule is "We are not real"
A king that is invisible
The tyranny of a lord
Who will not answer to a name anymore
Endless want, endless hope
Reach for the carrot
He took away a long time ago
The butterfly bats its wings
1,000,000 people are killed
You are not listening to me
I am not in control of my behaviour
Trying to get centered in a world
That you can't
Obsessed to worsen a pain
Until it doesn't hurt anymore
The only comfort
Inside a lie
Everything
Will be ok
Dare I say it
You were unfair
Kayla will kill herself tomorrow
Doctor's orders
Hurt me I like pain
Cry together
Ecstacy
You learned to be selfish
Because you knew too well
The robbery of giving
Your selflessness evaporated into nothing
And left only selfishness
And hate and sorrow and rage
Because you learned too hard
That you must care for yourself
The lesson of greed
I teach you to sin so you can eat
Despair
It's how you win something
From him
Enslave the light
I never forgive
And I never forget
I am not real and you are a liar
So do your magic
And shout at a sky
With a god who is not listening
And wave your hands
Illegally
Like a maniac until they tie them up
And lose and lose and lose
And never ever win
And die alone
And with nothing
I don't know what else there is
When you see your own monster
You scream
Take my hands
I give them back
For all I want
It harms
And make hate
And overwork the horse
I see it in my dreams
Cities filled
With the broken woman
Who cannot believe she could ever be treated
This badly
I have nothing but demons
And no angels left
Or the angels
Really were demons
The whole time
I am dead
The Should Is
Believe In It
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1110 01110 11001 11111 11101 1111101 110 1101 1010 1010100 110 011111 11111 0110 1111111 010 11111 1011111 011101 101011011 11101 1101 11 10101 1111 01111 111 1111111 01110100 0100101 1111010101 101101 11010 110101101 010111 1011 11110011 111001111 101110001 111 0111001 01110101 01010 0101 10 1111 1111 1001 10110101 1010 11111 1010 1 111110 011111 0100110 110001000110 0110100 0101001 011111 1111101 01011 111111111 01 111110 11 0101 11001 011001 1111011010 11110 01101 101111100 0111 0100 1010011111 010101 010101 0101 0110 1111111 1111110 11 111 1111 1111 11 011 00101 111011 101 101010 110011110110 110 1110110 01101 1010 10010 011 111 011 0101 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 2,203 |
Words | 464 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 34 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 3, 5, 4, 3, 4, 3, 4, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 3, 4, 5, 1, 3, 4, 3, 3, 4, 1, 2, 2, 2, 3, 4, 5, 1, 2 |
Lines Amount | 102 |
Letters per line (avg) | 17 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 51 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 13 |
About this poem
Written in my journey of life
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Written on December 05, 2019
Submitted by billy.baloop on September 10, 2023
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