Analysis of Eyes



When I gaze into your irresistible eyes,
The feelings within me begin to arise.
With your every look, my heart skips a beat.
I tingle all over from my head to my feet.

There’s just something about your eyes.
They’re more beautiful than the sunrise.
Your eyes sparkle more than diamonds or any gem.
When you stare at me I’m lost within them.

All I see is sunshine, rainbows and a dream.
They’re more stunning than anything I’ve ever seen.
They’re a field of flowers on a bright spring day.
Only your eyes make me feel this way.

Your eyes are hypnotic and I’m in a trance,
All of me is yours with only a glance.
I would cross oceans, deserts and the skies,
Just to stand in front of those eyes.

On that day I would be frozen in place,
Because of your eyes and the smile on your face.
If that day comes, I won’t swim in surprise,
Instead I’ll drown in the beauty of your eyes.

Nothing glitters brighter than gold,
That’s what they say, and that’s what I’m told.
Whoever said that is just full of lies,
They’ve never seen your gorgeous eyes.


Scheme AABB AACC XXDD EEAA FFAA GGAA
Poetic Form Quatrain  (83%)
Metre 11101101001 01001101101 11100111101 110110111111 11100111 11100101 111011101101 1111111011 111111001 11101101101 10111010111 101111111 11101001001 1111111001 1111010001 11101111 1111111001 01111001111 1111111001 01110010111 10101011 111101111 0101111111 11011101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,068
Words 225
Sentences 17
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 133
Words per stanza (avg) 33

About this poem

This was written for someone very special who has the most beautiful eyes in the world.

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Submitted by bkizzle on September 18, 2023

Modified by bkizzle on October 08, 2023

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Brian M. King

Brian M. King, a veteran of the U.S. Navy, has been writing stories, and poems, ever since he was able to put a pencil to paper. He’s a storyteller, poet, and screenwriter. His screenplays and poems have received awards in a variety of contests. His poem, The Surfer, which is featured in his debut poetry book, Out of the Darkness, was an October 2023 contest finalist. Brian can be found jotting down stories regarding topics such as overthinking, depression, anxiety, self-love, loneliness, self-transformation, and more. Brian lives in Greensboro, NC with his dog, Rocky, and his cats, Coco and Lulu. more…

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