Analysis of Life is a Dream....Why sleep?



The sun shines regardless of my perception of it  

The Rain falls no matter how I feel regarding my existence

The time progresses systematically

The only thing that changes in life is perspective

Change this one tiny issue

And life will become a waking dream

No more need for physical sleep

Past four, maybe five hours

Living in a state of relaxation

Is nirvana on earth

No worries for you......

Your book is already written

But it is a choose your ending story

Right mind, Right intention

Will always lead you to

Your happy ever after


Scheme X X A X B X X X C X B C A C B X
Poetic Form
Metre 0110101101011 0111101110101010 01100100 0101110011010 1111010 011010101 11111001 1110110 100011010 101011 11011 11101010 1110111010 111010 11111 1101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 586
Words 140
Sentences 2
Stanzas 16
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 27
Words per stanza (avg) 6

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When you are relaxed and realize that who put you here is in control..........LIfe can become a dream

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Written on September 10, 2023

Submitted by amatullahmaxey1 on September 10, 2023

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