Analysis of ONE DAY IN MAY



To the meadow's edge near the dense woods, we often came to play.  
This day we trod with heavy hearts, no happiness, just dread.   
Wheels caked with mud, we pushed and shoved the garden cart today.  
The content was wrapped in a cotton shroud, so soft beneath his head.

Myra Mae brought toys he had chewed, hoping to relieve our grief.
These past twelve years we came here often, so many memories we share.
Today, we bury him, and reverently say our goodbyes without enduring relief.
 Prince, our very special friend, we commit you to your eternal lair.

When Myra Mae turned four, her gift was one fur ball of joy.
 I would watch them run and play from the porch across the street.
Prince never tired. He loved to dodge and tease, mouth dangling a toy.  
One day he stopped, looked at me, and spoke in a whine so sweet:

“Can you come over and play?”  My shy response was a silent grin.
 Staring back, our eyes met, and we never looked away.  
With a sudden burst of energy, he launched up to my chin  
and slobbered kisses on my face. We bonded forever that day.

Our lives shared days of happiness and an occasional sad event.  
This day changed us forever when final crumbs of soft damp dirt
covered and tucked him in.  A well-chewed silicon bone was rent
and spread atop his grave.  Each piece that fell inflicted pain and hurt.

The sun came out and warmed our backs. Birds serenaded us from the woods.
A breeze stirred through the trees and delivered a sweet Mayflower scent.
 Myra Mae took my hands into hers and coaxed me to where she stood.
Entangled in an embrace, that day in May, I became  no longer innocent.


Scheme ABAB CDCD EFEF GAGA HIHI XHXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (83%)
Metre 10111011110111 11111101110011 11111101010101 0101100101110111 1011111110101101 11111111011010011 0111010100011010101001 110101011011110101 11011101111111 11111011010101 11010111101110001 11111110100111 1111001110110101 10110110110101 101011100111111 011011111001011 101111100010100101 111101011011111 100110011100111 0101111111010101 01110110110101101 011101001001101 1011110100111111 01001011101101110100
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,639
Words 326
Sentences 26
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 52
Words per line (avg) 13
Letters per stanza (avg) 208
Words per stanza (avg) 50

About this poem

remembering my youth

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Written on August 17, 2023

Submitted by compostken on September 08, 2023

1:38 min read
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Ken Bartett

A retired forester residing in a continuing care facility in Lancaster, PA. more…

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