Analysis of Somewhere in the Middle (Life Lies)



Isn't it something,
That there's as much evil in the ground
As good in the sky?

Isn't there something,
In the fact that there's torn up love letters,
And ripped off calendar pages
Decorating my floor?
Both who glitter by the sunlight of my window.

Because
Life lies somewhere in the middle
Of being untouchable
And needing to be held,
And sung to gently a while,

Life lies somewhere in the middle.

Of tragedy and romance,
Of you and I.
Of feeling stuck in place
And days that feel like flying
Through air!
Like days that you want to keep
In your pocket
And save for the dark times,
As that little bit of light.
But instead bleed through
the nightime into a new day.

Life lies somewhere in the middle.

Of Newton and Dylan,
Of feeling strong,
And missing your mom
Tucking you in at night.
And moonlight shinning on your
Gently pressed eyes,
Like a serene lullaby.

Life lies somewhere in the middle.
Life is held in place
By the good and the bad.
It lies in the eye of this
Perfect storm,
Fearless.
Yet it goes on.
It is stuck by nothing,
It glides right through time,
And by the end….

You stand there with your heart in your hands,
Bloody and blue,
And say
“Look what I did!”
I lived.


Scheme axb axxcx xDdxx D xbeaxxxxfgh D xxxfcxb Dexxxxxaxx xghxx
Poetic Form
Metre 10110 111110001 11001 10110 0011111110 01110010 10011 11101011110 01 1110010 1100100 010111 0111001 1110010 1100001 1101 110101 0111110 11 1111111 0110 011011 1110111 10111 0101011 1110010 110010 1101 01011 101011 01111 1011 100110 1110010 11101 101001 1100111 011 10 1111 111110 11111 0101 111111011 1001 01 1111 11
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,206
Words 270
Sentences 18
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 3, 5, 5, 1, 11, 1, 7, 10, 5
Lines Amount 48
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 102
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Submitted by Fayleeg26 on September 26, 2023

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Faylee Goren

Faylee is a 15 year old poet and songwriter from Canada. She enjoys all forms of creative expression, mostly written! more…

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