Analysis of The lady in the tree



There was an old lady who sat at the tree.
The tree in the ally, the ally that grieved.
A rope dangled down as she prayed her goodbye.
I sat there and watched her fly up to the sky.

Many years later I walk to that tree.
A new rope each time, I counted, 1, 2, and 3.
The many lives lost I look back at her rope.
Soon to be mine I gave up all hope.


Scheme AXBB AXCC
Poetic Form
Metre 11111011101 01001001011 0110111101 11101011101 1011011111 011111100 01011111101 111111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 349
Words 85
Sentences 9
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 4
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 129
Words per stanza (avg) 39

About this poem

When I wrote this poem I was going through a pretty rough moment in my life, losing a family member to suicide. I had to get it out on paper.

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Written on April 27, 2023

Submitted by ollie.burchett on September 08, 2023

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