Analysis of With you



I'll be right there, next to you
I'll walk with you, I'm still here.
You can't see me, neither can I
I'm still with you.

Wait for me at your tomorrow
I'll wait for you at my yesterday
Go back in our memories, we'll be there someday

I'm still here, with you
Always, I'll stand right next to you
I still can't see you,
but I promise, when we're there
I'll never lose you again.


Scheme AXXA XBB AAAXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111 1111111 11111011 1111 1111101 11111110 110101001111 11111 1111111 11111 1110111 1101101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 378
Words 80
Sentences 3
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 5
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 93
Words per stanza (avg) 25

About this poem

I wrote this poem as a message to a loved one. It hold many meanings to me. We went through our childhood together, though it has been a long time since.

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Written on September 16, 2023

Submitted by minister0108 on September 17, 2023

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Minjae Kwon

I grew up in South Korea, when I was there I enjoyed playing with my friends around nearby hills and small mountains. I use poetry as a way to keep myself away from total sadness. I moved to the United States five years ago. I also do ultimate frisbee and taekwondo as a sport. more…

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