Analysis of Heart Of An Ocean



Heart Of An Ocean

The heart of an ocean never rests
Emotions casts themselves
Against shores I can’t contest
Washing my brokenness
Over waking footprints
Tasting of salty tears
That never seem to end
Erasing my fragile joy
As sandcastles of dreams
Crumble beneath the surf.

Love is colored in deep blue hues
Passionate and immense
The softest water and solid ice
Shaping to show its true nature
Power and tenderness
And still unable to keep
Someone beside me forever
My tides are no match
For a island who refuses
Liquid oceanic affections.

My ocean no longer waves over you
The Sun has left the scene
And melancholy takes over
As the rains replace the light
Darkness resides here
Where you graced my side
I leave behind your memory
Something no land or sea
Should embrace;
I am all that remains.

Copyright © 2023 Charles Edward York
No part of this poem may be used or reproduced, stored in a retrieval system, or transmitted in any way or form or by any means electronic, mechanical, recording, or otherwise without the written permission of the author.*


Scheme X AXXAXXXXXX XXXBXXBXXX XXBXXXCCXX XB
Poetic Form
Metre 11110 011110101 010101 0111110 1011 10101 101101 110111 0101101 1111 100101 11100111 100001 010100101 10111110 100100 0101011 1011010 11111 10101010 10010010 1101101101 011101 0100110 101101 10011 11111 11011100 101111 101 111101 101101 111110111101100010101010010111111010100100010110010100101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,064
Words 195
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 10, 10, 10, 2
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 172
Words per stanza (avg) 37

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The multiple emotions of love lost

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Written on October 20, 2023

Submitted by charlesyork14 on October 20, 2023

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Charles Edward York

Charles Edward York is an author and poet activist living in Plano, Texas. He’s written over 1400 poems and published 17 books of poetry. Born in Vietnam and raised a citizen in Dallas, Texas, he writes poems that include the subjects of love and relationships, nature, social justice, including police violence against African-Americans and minorities, astronomy and others. more…

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