Analysis of You make me cry



You make me cry
Your eyes flawed and beautiful
To be adored by me
You make me cry
Your smiles broken and drier than the sea
Don't wanna say goodbye
You make me cry
Listen to the sand and not the sky
But you're supposed to fly
You make me cry
High flying people running by me
Tell me your story some day I pray
You make me cry
Lies, don't listen to the lies
Eat apple pies and poetry
You make me cry
Prejudiced and stigmatised are we?
Break us free, let's us be free
You make me cry
Caress the love in your eyes
Beyond me
You make me cry
Pain, I feel it every single day
Relief in my own reality
You make me cry
Can't help feel dignity
Through all the shame
You make me cry
Arch angels, guardian Angels, Father Mother God, and spirit guides, Devine mother, and all the greater good that hide behind my blind side
You make me cry
With dry eyes
I compliment your rainbow world
That makes me
try.


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 893
Words 180
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 34
Lines Amount 34
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 699
Words per stanza (avg) 179

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Beautiful people you make me cry

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Written on October 25, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on October 25, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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