Analysis of bearing



bearing that which I have not brought
What was brought on my being
Is a rage of a bearing that brought me to breaking
Broke my mind and my spirit from sorrow edged with anger
Anger that broke me to a thousand splinters
That sparkle like daggers
And sprinkle my presence
Like waypoints in a turning sea that tosses me shore to shore
Not of my choosing
But of my responsibility
I will litter them diligently
Knives on the beach,
Waiting to pop an innocent bloated whale


Scheme ABBCDDDEBFFGH
Poetic Form
Metre 10111111 1111110 1011010111110 11101101101110 1011110101 110110 010110 11001011101111 11110 11100100 111011000 1101 10111100101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 470
Words 91
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 380
Words per stanza (avg) 87

About this poem

bearing is a poem by Elaine Wilson about the pressure put upon people perceived as women, and about what it’s like to break under any kind of pressure. It seeks to convey the reluctance of being perceived by others, and to bear the weight of that perception.

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Written on October 28, 2023

Submitted by cetaxe01 on October 28, 2023

Modified by cetaxe01 on October 29, 2023

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