Analysis of 24HRS LESS



The sun has chosen not to forgive
The folly of my childhood years.
When under it's watchful stares
I did the most useless of things.
Now I'm older in a time
Of just too many things to do
It swiftly turns day into night
An outright deed to mock my plans.
I bet the sun has charmed the clock
To cheat me of my 24.

The sun must be a lady
In need of full attention.
If you sit under her idle
Making nothing of her shine,
When you then know what to do
She'd spread her wings and fly away
Into the night on honeymoon.
She'd tell her lover of your folly
So he'd dim his light with fury
Leaving you to work the night
With nothing but your candle light.
Then by dawn, she'd through your window
Laugh at you under your pillow.


Scheme XXXXXABXXX CXXXAXXCCBBDD
Poetic Form
Metre 011101101 0101111 1101101 11011011 1110001 11110111 11011011 11111111 11011101 11111 0111010 0111010 11110010 1010101 1111111 11010101 0101110 110101110 11111110 1011101 11011101 11111110 11110110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 721
Words 156
Sentences 8
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 10, 13
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 278
Words per stanza (avg) 73

About this poem

I wrote this poem to express my fear that I barely have enough time to accomplish all I need to in a day. But I'm building up my time management skill. It's funny to think that I alone have 24hrs less in a day.

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Submitted by Poeticbee on October 30, 2023

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My name is Bertha Kalaowubo aka poeticbee. Born on the 16th of March 2004. A Nigerian citizen and resident. To me poetry, is a painting of the mind in beautiful colours. My hobby in writing has exposed me to the world of communication and I've made a profession of it. more…

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