Analysis of 6 Kilometer



The feeling of sweaty, sticky skin hitting the rubber
A tricky piece that tasted like pain, victory and sweat
Finally at peace, the broken rowing machine and the floor, a couple of my mentors saying "Congrats"
My stats improved with a smell of sweaty teenagers, the drum major in my ears kept me going
I had to adapt to the sounds of the ones who snapped their PR cries of join and fear like a depressing cheer,
We are rowers, always some growers, never slower.


Scheme ABCDEA
Poetic Form
Metre 01011010110010 01011101110001 1001101010010010101110101 11011011101001100111110 11101101101111111101100101 11111101010
Characters 461
Words 86
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 6
Lines Amount 6
Letters per line (avg) 61
Words per line (avg) 14
Letters per stanza (avg) 366
Words per stanza (avg) 85

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Written on November 01, 2023

Submitted by peteypickles2 on November 01, 2023

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