Analysis of Am I the Clam?



Invisible existence
Buried in muck
Paralyzed, constricted
Dark, Heavy and Stuck

Unaware the intentions
Of a predator hov’ring above
Mistaking attention
And grandeur for love

Oh, to be noticed
Plucked from that muck
A moment of soaring
High, Free, and Unstuck

Chosen and Risen
Every synapse engaged
The chooser flies higher
Turbulent, rough and enraged

With a savage ejection
A perilous drop
Confused and Disoriented
A jagged outcrop

That sickening sound
Breaking, Shattering, CRACK
Consumed by another
Their final attack

Indeed, I was
With the chooser convolved
I was the clam
Now, I have evolved


Scheme XABA XCDC XAXA DEFE DGXG XHFH XBXX
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 0100010 1001 10010 11001 010010 10100101 010010 00111 11110 1111 010110 11001 10010 1001001 01110 1001001 1010010 01001 0100100 011 11001 101001 011010 11001 0111 1011 1101 11101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 605
Words 102
Sentences 1
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 70
Words per stanza (avg) 14

About this poem

This is a rework of a raw journal entry. Some years ago, I moved to Maine to escape an abusive relationship. The Maine coast brought much healing as I analyzed my journey through observations of the natural world around me.

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Written on October 28, 2023

Submitted by MaggieRan26 on October 28, 2023

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Maggie Ransom

I am a Caregiver and End of Life Doula. I am ever inspired by the natural world and the nature of people. I live in Maine with my husband and our small menagerie. more…

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