Analysis of Death of a Pear Tree



The pear tree rotted for many years,
its trunk covered in soft spots of sickness before at last bending in a final exhale.
I cut it at the blackened roots before it fell,
while it still had green in its leaves.

The first bright green pear it ever gifted us,
fresh and sour and just right,
we split in four tiny pieces;
The first fruit you ever had
was picked from those enormous branches.

In the summer it shielded us from the sun
and when the deep white winters came
we built huts under its canopy.
Every day for long years
our pear tree kept watch.

I never thought about the tree dying.
After all it's only wood and fruit,
just a piece of scenery.
The tree was nameless, faceless.
It had no tongue for words.

Yet when the pear tree fell I cried.
Even knowing it had to go,
I felt it in my breastbone when it tumbled.
That sort of deep rot can't be fixed
But we know better than most:

You can still grieve despite the knowing.


Scheme AXXX BXCXC XXDAX EXDBX XXXXX E
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 011101101 1110011110011110001001 111101010111 11111011 01111110101 1010011 11011010 0111101 111101010 00101101101 01011101 111101100 1001111 101111 1101010110 101110101 1011100 0111010 111111 11011111 10101111 1110111110 11111111 1111011 111101010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 939
Words 207
Sentences 12
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 5, 5, 5, 1
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 121
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Written on August 08, 2023

Submitted by josefine8240 on October 10, 2023

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