Analysis of Equality



Sharing is caring
Life should be fair
Treat people equally
Show them you care

It is nice to be nice
To treat each other right
Let’s not be mean
To argue or fight

Peace and love
Happiness too
Don’t let others
Be mean to you


Scheme XAXA XBXB XCXC
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 10110 1111 110100 1111 111111 111101 1111 11011 101 1001 1110 1111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 230
Words 48
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 59
Words per stanza (avg) 15

About this poem

My 9 year old son feels so strongly about equality. He feels we should be treated equally and hates any sort of discrimination. It all says it in his words. He wrote this by himself and made my heart melt and gave me goosebumps

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Submitted by zoe_traff84 on October 28, 2023

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Lenny Murphy

My 8 year old son wrote this for his school during an equality week. He actually won an award for his poem. He feels so strongly about being kind and caring to others and I feel it shows in his poem more…

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