Analysis of Moments

Gretchen Stevens 1978 (California)



Moments
Our lives are filled with so many moments
Some are built
With heart feels and happiness
Some are so painful, so sad
We want them to be erased
Some make us so mad
That we begin to lose faith
Moments in love
Moments in hate
In these moments we become
The decisions we make
To enjoy, or forget some
It’s up to us to let them keep us awake
Or wake us up to live
To be our true selves
It’s in these moments we believe
Live every moment to the most because
You only get one life, one body
To trust, love, live and dream
I wish we could all see
The beauty
These moments determine who we
Are meant to be


Scheme AABCDEDFGHIJIJKLMNOPOOOO
Poetic Form
Metre 10 10111111010 111 1110100 1111011 1111101 11111 1101111 1001 1001 0110101 001011 1011011 11111111101 111111 111011 10110101 11001010101 110111110 111101 111111 010 11001011 1111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 607
Words 124
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 24
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 473
Words per stanza (avg) 124

About this poem

I have been on a very long and difficult health journey. I just had lymph node removal surgery because I have been seeing multiple oncologists. I’ve been in a very dark place. Writing helps so much

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Written on October 23, 2023

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Gretchen Stevens

45 year old single female who work in the veterinary field. I am a dog trainer. I love cheese, yoga, walks in the park. I’m very sensitive, empathic and have a huge heart more…

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