Analysis of Never, Not Yet



(In honor of October being National Domestic Violence Awareness Month.)

Your words are caustic
Your eyes are fire

You claim love
It burns only as desire

What was once tomorrow
Can only be today

Only a moment
Disguised as someone, some way

A soft look behind me
A pause
A wonder of regret

But no
Never
Never, not yet


Scheme X XA XA BC XC XXD BAD
Poetic Form Tetractys  (53%)
Metre 0101010101000101000101 11110 11110 111 11101010 11101 110101 10010 011111 011011 01 010101 11 10 1011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 322
Words 67
Sentences 2
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 3, 3
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 36
Words per stanza (avg) 8

About this poem

There can be a moment an abused spouse or partner realizes their loved one is not going to change. Will they have the strength to leave them?

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Written on October 08, 2023

Submitted by TheLanes3202 on October 09, 2023

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Bryanne Lane

I am a pastor’s wife and stay at home, homeschooling mom. I have been writing since I was a little girl. Much of my writing today is influenced by the loss of my son, Ethan. Grief can be expressed so beautifully through writing, and writing is so healing to me. more…

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