Analysis of Night sky



Through the clouds,
Fly, take my wings
Stand next to the moon,
one side at a time,
See you again

Stars, shining in the night sky
Misty fogs, of the dawn
The blue sky, fly along

Shine, like the bright sun
Nothing is forever, still
Don't say goodbye,
In our dreams,
take my hand, and along the birds of the sky
we will fly together

Stand next to my stars,
I'll wave my hand at the night sky
When the sun goes down,
See you once again.


Scheme XXXXA BXX XXBXBX XBXA
Poetic Form
Metre 101 1111 11101 11101 1101 1100011 101101 011101 11011 1010101 111 0101 11100101101 111010 11111 11111011 10111 11101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 437
Words 97
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 3, 6, 4
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 82
Words per stanza (avg) 22

About this poem

One night I was looking up in the sky while I was outside. Then I started writing this poem on a sheet of paper. This is an encouragement to those who struggle with life and to those who lost their wings, it is a new pair of wings for them to fly with.

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Written on October 06, 2023

Submitted by minister0108 on October 07, 2023

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Minjae Kwon

I grew up in South Korea, when I was there I enjoyed playing with my friends around nearby hills and small mountains. I use poetry as a way to keep myself away from total sadness. I moved to the United States five years ago. I also do ultimate frisbee and taekwondo as a sport. more…

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