Analysis of Viewed From Above



If our lives were viewed from above,
would others be able to sense our love?

We are normal people, living a normal existence—

—but, below what everyone sees, I feel your presence.

Like a helpless soul stuck in the dark corners of my mind, I wonder if you are truly even there.

Would other people see and feel you are part of me, if they were to stop for a moment and stare?

I close my eyes and hope that you feel me as much as I do you.

I wish with all my heart that you are not a story my imaginative mind has created from out of the blue.

For I paint colors of us in red, purple, and green.

I lay in bed with you in the evening, and dream of you in places we can’t be seen.

It isn’t fair that I cannot express what my heart wants you to know.

If our lives were viewed from above, would you see all I have not been able to show?

Would you escape for a moment and look at me the same way you have done so many times?

Would you tell me how you felt, and admit your heart’s crimes.

If our lives were viewed from above, would others be able to sense our love?

We are normal people that live normal lives—

—and perhaps the world cannot see the soul’s secrets and all it deprives.


Scheme AA B B C C D D E E F F G G A X X
Poetic Form
Metre 110101101 11011011101 11101010010010 101110111110 1010110011011111011110101 110101011111111011101001 1111011111111111 11111111110101010001101011101 1111011011001 110111001001110101111 1111110011111111 110101101111111111011 1101101001110111111101 1111111001111 11010110111011011101 11101011101 00101101011001101
Characters 1,213
Words 269
Sentences 15
Stanzas 16
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 53
Words per line (avg) 14
Letters per stanza (avg) 56
Words per stanza (avg) 15

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Forbidden love

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Written on October 15, 2023

Submitted by ambmia1288 on October 15, 2023

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