Analysis of On the First Day of Winter



The first day of Winter

On the first day of winter,
The wind blew right through me.,,
I hadn’t even raised a Christmas tree.

On the second day of winter, it suddenly struck me ;
This wasn’t about Christmas but advancement into history.

On the third day of winter, the weather brought a chill;
The substance from the day was nil.

On the fourth day of winter, my garden finally froze;
The ice cast a reflective glaze like a shroud upon my rose.

On the fifth day of winter, the ground began to freeze.
The issuing precipitation made walking or talking ill at ease,

On the sixth day of winter, I ‘d felt I’d had enough..,
This misery descending upon me  had begun to be  just too way too tough.

On the seventh day of winter, I’d raised myself  from gloom.
I’d watched my garden struggle snd even a new blossom bloom.

On the 8th day of winter,  what more nature have said?
Whatever’s nature is either in the process of dying or is already dead.

Arman E. Hoque B.A., M.P.A., J.D.
Barrister, Solicitor, Notary Public
EmpyreanLaw:  Law Offices of Arman Hoque


Scheme A ABB BB CC DD EE FF GG HH HII
Poetic Form
Metre 011110 1011110 011111 111010101 10101110110011 110110101001100 1011110010101 01010111 10111101101001 011001011010111 1011110010111 01000010110110111 10111101111101 11000100111011111111 1010111011111 111101011001101 10111110111011 110110001110110101 1011111 100010010010 111001101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,085
Words 234
Sentences 21
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 1, 3, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 3
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 81
Words per stanza (avg) 20

About this poem

I reconciled winter with nature Reconciled that with Christmas … Then reconciled it with a song into a Poem

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Submitted by Arman_1 on November 10, 2023

Modified by Arman_1 on November 10, 2023

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Arman Hoque

Founder of Empyrean Law and Senior Counsel, Arman Hoque holds a Juris Doctor degree from the University of Windsor in addition to a Master’s degree in Public Administration and a B.A. degree in Law and Society from the Ivy League Cornell University. In July 2004, he was called to the bar as barrister, solicitor, and notary public, following Articles with a prestigious Queen’s Counsel Firm. He worked in association with several prominent law firms and sage mentors to develop his high standard before establishing his own practice. Since then, he has grown his law firm. Focused on his compassion for access to justice, Mr. Hoque has received news attention for cases he has fought and won for his clients spanning 15 years of practice. He has contributed to precedents in the legal community and has been awarded numerous accolades recognizing his devotion to the law. For his clients, he uses his formidable cumulative knowledge and world-spanning experiences to effectively turn their real into as close to their ideal as legally possible. He has been a poet most his life, having self-published a volume in 1993 by honour of his patron father. more…

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