Analysis of Machines

Laurie Edberg 1966 (Sechelt)



What the machines don’t know

The machines don’t know my name,
The machines don’t know what is is to breathe.

Just like Data from Star Trek,
A machine can seek to feel touch,
But never will.
Or Dave from Space odyssey,
Feel compassion.

The machines are collections of wires and bolts,
To be programmed by humans.
Humans think like god,
But can humans really be god.
Man vs machine.


Scheme X XX XXXXX XXAAX
Poetic Form
Metre 100111 0011111 0011111111 1110111 00111111 1101 1111100 1010 001101011001 111110 10111 11101011 11001
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 389
Words 83
Sentences 6
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 5, 5
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 74
Words per stanza (avg) 17

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Written on November 10, 2023

Submitted by Laurie.edberg on November 10, 2023

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