Analysis of 67 years old



67 years old
God will I still be alive when I am 67 years old?
God I am now in my 50's
And my health is ok
I take care of my health every day
God I have depression and diabeties
I take medications for depression and diabeties every day
I don't miss a day
God can you please heal me from my depression and diabeties?
Because I want to be healed from my depression
God I hope that you will keep me alive until I am 67 years old
I don't know if I still be around at 67
I don't know if I will be frail or not
I don't know if I be able to walk or not
Also I don't know if I still be able to see
Because I might be blind by then
Also I don't know if I will be able to talk
God I have grey hair now
Will I lose my hair when I am 67
Will I lose my tooth and have to wear denture
Will I be in a wheelchair when I am 67years old


Scheme AABCCBCCBDAEFFGHIJKLA
Poetic Form
Metre 11 111110111111 1111011 011111 1111111001 11101001 110101010011001 11101 1111111101001 011111111010 1111111101011111 1111111011 1111111111 111111101111 1011111111011 01111111 1011111111011 111111 11111111 11111011110 11100111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 818
Words 188
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 624
Words per stanza (avg) 186

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That is an old poem Written by Aldo kraas

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Written on November 18, 2023

Submitted by krasaldo13 on November 18, 2023

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Aldo Kraas

Aldo Kraas has been writing poem for 26 years He start to write poems in January 5th 1996 more…

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