Analysis of I See Now



Can I take a breath, I just need some air?
 the stuff I'm taking-in in isn't so clear.
I See
My eyes are now opened, many things I now see,
I know now why it bothers me.
I See
I walk forward but not straight,
the complexity of my journey shows not hate.
I see clearly but not through you.
I See
I hear voices from within telling me you can win.
Win this battle against hatred, despise, and deceit,
I See
Battle finding not just equality but equity.
I See
Sometimes the pain is so great, I feel numb,
moving my feet but I can't run.
I See
Run from the hurt that keeps me bound.
no one notices what's keeping me down.
I see now more than ever before,
because the air I breathe,
I See
the hurt I’ve felt and hand I was dealt
I See
is not the narrative of my life, merely Obstacles
I See
that kept me Focused through my Journey.
I See, I See, I See Now.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1110111111 01110001011 11 111110101111 11111101 11 1110111 001001110111 11101111 11 1110101101111 1110011001001 11 10101101001100 11 0101111111 10111111 11 11011111 1110011011 111111001 010111 11 011101111 11 11010011110100 11 111101110 1111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 865
Words 193
Sentences 13
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 29
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 643
Words per stanza (avg) 174

About this poem

In life we ask why and why me. We try so solving life mysteries, but we fail to see. I was inspired to write this poem as I looked back over my life trying to understand the struggles and strength through persistence that keep me trying harder to be batter and help others. I see that my problems were only learning and growth opportunities.

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Written on November 25, 2023

Submitted by Meizza on November 29, 2023

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Azziem 'TheDream' Underwood

Azziem has an abundance of experience working with public organizations, unions, co-workers and Management. Azziem is a member and 1st President for Advocacy with Democrats for Diversity and Inclusion. Board Member and former Chair of the 11th Legislative District Democratic Organization & Former Chair of the 8th CD Central Committee Past Chairman and 2012 Obama National Delegate. Azziem was a long time President of the Washington State Democratic African American Caucus. Azziem also held board position in King County Democratic Central Committee KCDCC. where he chaired the Legislative Action Committee. One of his proudest moments was in 1998 when he won the Warren G. Magnuson Award for Committeeman of the year. In 2000 Azziem ran for State Senate in the 5th LD (D) against the incumbent and looks forward to running for an Office again. more…

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