Analysis of What Of The Immortal Soul (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



What Of The Immortal Soul   (Bussokusekik)

Do ship captains keep
Top secret pirate ledgers
For those eyes only
Authorized for seven seas
Those who’ve pledged to Davy Jones
What of the immortal soul

Edwin Tanguma.  Aka   Dagesh   12/06/2023


Scheme X XXXXXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 11001011 11101 1101010 11110 101101 1111101 1100101 10010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 244
Words 41
Sentences 2
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 63
Words per stanza (avg) 15

About this poem

Was said magnificent ship scuttled to try to void said wager???What say ye Dee Garner or Gardner and BT Miles???And what of the specific clause regarding a well trained puppy pick of the litter???Maybe I am just rambling on…I was a little groggy at the time…I do believe my soul is saved and I have earned the booty, rum, and puppy…I will be heading off to my small off grid Tx ranch within the next week…Weather permitting…I am hoping for smooth sailing…As IF pirates exist in Corporate America in this modern day and age…This is jest a silly tale from my overactive imagination…

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Written on December 06, 2023

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on December 07, 2023

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