Analysis of A mess
I’m a mess
I am more than obsessed,
I refuse to progress,
I will always be more nothing less.
And fix this situation I’m always a mess
Am better than the rest.
I am the best,
An insomniac with no rest,
I am a relentless strategist that is too good for chess,
I have everything to confess…
If you hadn’t already guessed it I’m a mess,
A hypocritical,
A poet of the lyrical
And abandon clown trying prove hysterical.
Only happy to be alive what a miracle
That I’m alive to see the day of the next cuz’ I’m a mess.
To join the hopeless in the next fest
And add something to my life likewise zest
Striving after perfection hit an dead end faced
With rejection body started acting up left with medication.
Goin around in a circle cuz I never learned my lesson
Fighting wars with some extra aggression,
rappers with no thought include no moral lesson.
All my big problems started in freshmen
Got worse with each relation
Praying to God that I make it out of this succession.
I was a mess
But when things start turning into a mess
The smart progress
Take all the problems in and digest
To find an answer and hope it doesn’t lead you into another mess.
Scheme | ABAAABBBAAACCCCABBDEEEEFEEAAABA |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 101 111101 10111 11111101 0110101101 110101 1101 1010111 110010100111111 1110101 11101011101 00100 01010100 001011010100 1010110110100 110111011011101 110100011 011011111 101001011111 1010101010111010 101001011101110 1011110010 101110111010 1111010010 1111010 10111111111010 1101 1111100101 011 110100001 11110011111010101 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,165 |
Words | 232 |
Sentences | 8 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 31 |
Lines Amount | 31 |
Letters per line (avg) | 29 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 903 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 217 |
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