Analysis of My Best “Fren” (Whom I’m in Luv With)



We’ve recently reconnected
And suddenly it’s been revealed to me that
He’s the One
That he has been all along
The one I’ve been preparing for
That what I’ve been feeling for him since childhood
Was more than just deep infatuation
More Than just puppy love
More Than just crazy ridiculously extreme desire
That our destinies were always tied
Tho we were separated for so long-
YEARS, TIME, DISTANCE…
To a myriad circumstances beyond our control…

So then his random DMs…
Sending funny clips
Small chit chats
Him expressing a bit of deep thoughts
Visions start pouring in,
Of him studying me intensely in secret
Him finally coming to visit from afar,
With a pop up surprise proposal  
With no courtship
With our Declarations of Love
And a Quick Elopement  
And more…  
Told me he secretly wanted me for always,
As did I, but was taken by surprise
Because he friend-zoned me
After a brief fling in childhood
That started with my first kiss,
His tenderly placed kiss on my cheek

He said he never stopped thinking ’bout me
Long after tragedy struck of his mom passing  
And he moved about, far far away
Into adulthood,
And us into our own separate paths…
But I never moved,
And he was homesick…
Thought he forgot about me
And I tucked him deep away in my memories…

My best “fren”,
Whom I thought was unrequited love
And could never have
Or see again
Said he may visit soon
So let’s see if all my visions
And Many Confirmations from the Lord
Do Come True
Let’s see if our Destinies,
Set by God from birth, collide paths again
And soar into the Stratosphere!
Yes!! To be continued…


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Poetic Form
Metre 11000010 01001101111 101 1111101 01110101 1111101111 111110010 111101 111100100001010 110100011 110100111 1110 10100100011001 111101 10101 111 101001111 101100 111001010010 110010110101 101101010 111 11001011 0011 01 11110010111 1111110101 011111 1001101 1101111 110011111 1111011011 110100111110 011011101 0101 0101101101 11101 0111 1101011 011110101100 111 11110101 01101 1101 111101 11111110 010010101 111 11110100 1111101101 0101010 111010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,628
Words 313
Sentences 3
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 13, 18, 9, 12
Lines Amount 52
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 312
Words per stanza (avg) 71

About this poem

I’ve recently reconnected with my first love, my childhood friend this fall, and felt led to write about it.

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Written on November 11, 2023

Submitted by babbina on November 11, 2023

1:33 min read
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Kari Michele Chrichlow

I'm from NYC and have a daughter who is a creative soul like me. I like to sing, write and rest in my spirituality. more…

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