Analysis of TICKET STUB MEMORIES



Pressed between cellophane
The torn halves of two ancient amusement park tickets
And a strip of black and white fun-house photos
(two boys grinning goofily -- one freckled-face,
the other, bespectacled, mouth full of metal)
Conjure images of a summer day long past

Neon lights and pinball machines
Buttered popcorn and soda-sticky concrete floors
We were inseparable then
Blood Brother buddies
Made from a pen knife and spit
Time stood still then
There was time for everything
Now. . .

Time has overtaken us

I had my suit pressed
And my shoes polished
I would say my final good-bye later
When he was laid beneath the grass

But for now, memories will have to do.


Scheme XXXXXX XXAXXAXX X XXXX X
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 10110 0111110010110 0011101111 111011101 010010011110 101001010111 1010101 10101010011 10010001 11010 1101101 1111 111110 1 111001 11111 01110 1111101110 11110101 1111001111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 665
Words 119
Sentences 4
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 8, 1, 4, 1
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 106
Words per stanza (avg) 23

About this poem

This poem was inspired by a pair of ticket stubs I had to a play I saw in London.

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Written on October 10, 1999

Submitted by ajmiz827 on November 10, 2023

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Anthony J. Mizzi

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