Analysis of INCARNATION OF LIGHT



 He is a temporary resident of this earthly existence; I would plunge into the foam of my non-existence just once if I could learn from everyone's selfish mistakes! With a stateless fragmented will, I am tolerably able to build my way, while I know for sure that a bright career is not waiting for me: I have a history of witness in my skull! I would try in vain to break out from behind my cage limits, to be truly known; but in me a frightened, orphaned child clenches his little hands forbidding!

My anxiety loneliness also grows daily when I venture out into hyena-rodent daylight! With someone, it would be nice to finally tear down the walls if we could celebrate a new start together! - In my bones the cold of the cosmos is raging: before creation a melee of silence is ringing in my ears! The night's naughty, nasty dreams have worn me down!

It is as if the Pearl of hope is expanding in her dear eyes; as if she wants to protect and help at the same time!

As if one of us from another time could bend over to this now! We look back at the other while comforting him kindly! Let us peel off the redeeming Universe with budding kisses from each other if we can while our bodies yearn incessantly! In our inner landscapes we roam boldly and freely in each other's petal-hearts! We desire more hand-holding encouragement, and in our hunger for love we sit on lonely rock-ores!

Sometimes we consciously come together and fall apart…


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Characters 1,444
Words 273
Sentences 14
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 227
Words per line (avg) 53
Letters per stanza (avg) 227
Words per stanza (avg) 53
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Written on December 16, 2023

Submitted by oasev on December 15, 2023

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Norbert Tasev

I was born on November 30, 1983 in Budapest! I studied Hungarian history. I was history teacher. I'm editing ebooks! So far, I have published my volumes on Smachwords and Publishdrive as part of an author's book publishing! more…

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