Analysis of As The Flag Still Waves...



Here we are the one year anniversary of that horrible day,
When America was changed forever - in a very public way.
As we set and remember the lives that were lost,
And try to understand all of the pain and what it cost.
So many were so brave as all of us could only watch,
As the planes hit one by one-causing in the towers-another flaming notch.
The smoke was so thick with the flames being that hot,
We suddenly all became thankful for all that we've got.
As the Twin Towers stood burning - New York was in shock,
The tears were flowing and falling with the glass, steel, & rock.
A state of shock and swept across the world and to all,
As we watched the Twin Towers burn and then had to watch them fall.
But the terror was not over-another plane was in flight,
As it crashed into the Pentagon-we could feel the lose &fright.
The panic was massive - and the anger & fear were large,
It could've been so much worse - but there were hero’s in charge.
A fourth hi-jacked plane was falling out of the sky,
Taken back by 40 brave passengers who never needed to ask why.
As we all watched in fear - our hearts were just shattered,
Watching all of this unfold live on TV - to us - was all that mattered.
No one was concerned about work or all the bills they owed,
We were all glued to our TV's and watching what it showed.
We'd never had an attack like this ever before on American soil,
So as the tragedy of the day unfolded - all of our blood begin to boil.
We as a nation were angry, devastated, and in disbelief,
The pain was so intense no one knew how to handle all of the grief.
The whole world came together as one United Nation,
We were glued to the skies & watching our favorite TV station.
Our hearts couldn't believe what our eyes were seeing,
How could anyone do this horrible deed - certainly not a human being.
How can you take all of those lives and have no guilt,
To destroy human life and all the buildings that were built.
They say Osama Bin Laden is the person who is behind it all,
Yet he is still out there somewhere alive - and causing the killing of them all.
Who's to say that he's not planning to do it all over again,
For the God they worship and pray to - doesn't believe in sin.
He's still out there hiding - no one really knows just where,
Why can't our government find him - don't they even care.
All the money that has been spent has really cost us,
Yet he cannot be found so for all who died - there is still no justice.
When will all the terrorists be stopped - no one really knows,
We will be on their trails no matter where they ever really go.
Here on this one year Anniversary - America is a different place,
Flying anywhere has changed and is at a much slower pace.
We will never forget all of those whose lives were lost,
Look at what the terrorists have done - and for America - what it has cost.
As we look at our world today it's a different place to be,
We are standing strong & united for all the world to see.
Our freedom is not lost - we will never again be slaves,
Look around you America...Yes...Our flag still waves!

In memory of the people who lost their lives on that September day.


Scheme AABCDDEEFFGGHHIIJJKKLLMMNNOOPPQQGGXXRRSSXXTTBCUUVV A
Poetic Form
Metre 1110110100111001 10100110100010101 111001001101 0110111010111 11001111111101 1011111100010010101 011111011011 11001011011111 1011011011101 0101001010111 0111010101011 111011010111111 101011100101101 11101010111011 0101100010101 10011111101001 011111101101 1011110011010111 1111011010110 101110111111111110 11101011110111 10111101010111 1101101111001101001 110100101010111010111 110100101000001 01110111111101101 01110101101010 10110110101001110 10110011101010 1110111001100101010 111111110111 10110101010101 110101101010110111 111111101010010111 1111111011111001 101110011100101 1111101110111 11101001111101 1010111111011 11101111111111110 11101001111101 1111111101110101 1111101000100101001 10101101101101 1110011111101 1110100110101001111 11111010110100111 11101010110111 101011111100111 10111111 010010101111110101
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 3,131
Words 668
Sentences 28
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 50, 1
Lines Amount 51
Letters per line (avg) 47
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,206
Words per stanza (avg) 308

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Written on January 16, 1963

Submitted by rcatron1963 on December 16, 2023

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