Analysis of A MEMORY IN THE PAST



There was a time
When I really loved you
There was nobody else besides you
You were the one that I rather die for.

I remember
The times that we shared
We were walking hand in hand
Making love on the sand.

You know
I didn't want to break-up
At times I felt like making-up
You were driving me mad
There were times when you made me sad.

I try
I try to forgive you
I try to forget you
How long will it last
When you become a memory in the past?


Scheme XAAX XXBB XCCDD XAAEE
Poetic Form
Metre 1101 111011 1111011 1001111011 1010 01111 1010101 101101 11 1101111 11111101 101011 10111111 11 111011 111011 11111 11010100001
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 444
Words 99
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 5, 5
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 85
Words per stanza (avg) 23

About this poem

This was written 05/13/1995. This was published in the anthology Best Poems Of 1996 and Copyright 1996 by The National Library of Poetry, in the anthology Poetic Voices Of America/Spring 1996 and Copyright 1996 by Sparrowgrass Poetry Forum Incorporated, and in the anthology A Delicate Balance and Copyright 1996 by The National Library of Poetry. Copyright 2023 by sweetslimited.

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Written on May 13, 1995

Submitted by markanthonyschroettner on December 19, 2023

Modified by markanthonyschroettner on December 27, 2023

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