Analysis of Stoop Low



So many opportunities there are today.
To stoop low and follow behind those,
Afraid of the truth to face to embrace...
That allow themselves to become disgraced.

So many opportunities for them to take,
An easy road to a cesspool.
As if there they will find,
Their addicted minds cleansed...
Of a fiction kept to keep themselves,
Becoming victims of their own ignorance.

Yet...
This to occur without consciousness to have.
Or common sense used,
Collectively between themselves...
To open their eyes and minds done to abuse.
Will always find them,
Protectively defending...
The very ones who have made them fools.

To believe the ones,
Who have fed them to feed historically.
Are now, today, no more deserving,
Than to be disrespected.
Neglected.
And referred by names,
That would turn their own...
Immigrant ancestors,
Away from associating them to be...
Descendents.

While these same ungrateful people,
Who are are not only thieves.
Crooks known to deceive publicly.
Claiming a country they have shown,
Zero patriotism.
Did everything they could,
To avoid civil and military service.
Contributed proudly to the spreading...
Of division, bigotry and racism.
In the attempt to segregate humanity.
Into discriminating ethnic races.
Made to fight over crumbs.
With this done to do to a country great.
To have this doing done to have it believe,
One who has already committed fraud...
Betrayal and treason.
Is the best pick they can choose,
To better their lives with evidence proven.
An habitual liar.
Addicted to narcissistic values.
And an ego needing constantly fed,
To feed self and no one else.

And this shown to know it,
Can only be explained.
By those who have become equally insane.
To accept their way of life,
Will not be drastically changed to remain...
As is!
With a few limited adjustments made!


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Poetic Form
Metre 11001001101 111010011 0110111101 1010110101 11001001111 1101101 111111 101011 101011101 01010111100 1 11010110011 11011 01000101 11011011101 1111 0100010 010111111 10101 11111101000 110111010 111010 010 00111 11111 10010 0110100111 010 11101010 1111101 11101100 10010111 101000 11011 10110010010 0100101010 1010100010 00011100100 0101001010 111101 1111110101 11110111101 1110100101 010010 1011111 11011110010 1010010 010101010 0110101001 1110111 011111 110101 11110110001 1011111 1111001101 11 1011000101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,808
Words 360
Sentences 39
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 6, 8, 10, 22, 7
Lines Amount 57
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 238
Words per stanza (avg) 50
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Written on December 20, 2023

Submitted by lpahtillah on December 20, 2023

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