Analysis of Betrayal

Bilal ashiq 2002 (Jammu)



Let me owe the tally the time I withered on thee,
Your betraying eyes looked honest to me.
You departed my soul from me,
Now the left is living flesh and meat.
               ~ bilal ashiq


Scheme AAABC
Poetic Form Cinquain  (20%)
Metre 1110100111011 1010111011 10101111 101110101 11
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 190
Words 39
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 5
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 134
Words per stanza (avg) 35

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About betrayal from lover

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Written on September 05, 2002

Submitted by BILALASHIQ2021 on December 24, 2023

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