Analysis of fever



wishing for residing through the purple
and some different shades of a red
with perfunctorily navy blue
like a goddam daydream become true

my significant other will kiss me
on the very top of my forehead
slightly whisper me words of affection
and our souls now each other reflection

that existing was promised to me mid the stars
while my soul was only created
by the fragments of twinkling places
shredding down to the space evermore


Scheme XABB XACC XXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1010101010 011001101 11101 1011011 1010010111 101011110 1010111010 01011110010 101011011101 111110010 1010110010 10110110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 446
Words 88
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 120
Words per stanza (avg) 25

About this poem

i was ill when i wrote this so that’s why it calls fever :) cus obviously i had a fever making this lol, enjoy!

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Written on November 07, 2023

Submitted by vaatova906 on December 28, 2023

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