Analysis of Whispers Beyond the Wall



**Whispers Beyond the Wall**

In the shadow of barriers, a journey's call,
Through hidden paths, beneath the wall.
Ladders sway, guards dream away,
Whispers weave, in night and day.

Under moon's gaze, secrets spill,
Tracing paths, against the hill.
Ships of the sky, shadows cast,
Echoes of future, whispers of past,
Trumpets cry, walls outlast.

Along the bricks, quiet words tread,
Prayers and chants, hope's fragile thread.
Birds take flight, secrets in their hold,
Carrying messages, brave and bold.
Words penned in ink, stories untold,

From dreams' depth, a voice, clear and bold,
Speaks of courage, in tales old,
Echoing from walls, strong and cold.

In whispers and courage, find your way, says Raheel,
In each hidden path, truth and hope reveal.


Scheme A AABB CCDDD EEFFF FFF AX
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Metre 100101 0011100011 11010101 1011101 1010101 1011101 1010101 110111 101101011 10111 01011011 1011101 11110011 100100101 11011001 11101101 1110011 10011101 01001011111 0110110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 755
Words 145
Sentences 8
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 5, 5, 3, 2
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 97
Words per stanza (avg) 20

About this poem

"Whispers Beyond the Wall" is a poetic exploration of overcoming obstacles and discovering hidden strengths. It paints a vivid picture of finding secret paths and hope even in the face of daunting barriers. The poem weaves a tapestry of resilience and determination, symbolized by whispered secrets and quiet words of courage. Ultimately, it's a reminder by the poet, Raheel, that in every challenge, there lies an opportunity to find truth and hope.

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Submitted by raheelanwar on December 13, 2023

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Raheel Anwar

Raheel is a contemporary poet whose work reflects a deep understanding of today's global challenges. His poetry speaks to the heart, blending hope and leadership with a thoughtful and attentive perspective on world issues. more…

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