Analysis of crackle



my candle burned out
they gathered round each others flames and kept warm
how could my flame keep burning?
you came along, your flamed seemed to burn so bright
you helped me re light my candle
crackle
our flames burned too close.
you’re afraid,
crackle
you blew out my flame
left me alone, cold and in the dark
selfish and a coward
you steal flames like mine
i hope you burn in them.


Scheme abcdeEfgEhijkl
Poetic Form
Metre 11011 11011101011 1111110 11011111111 11111110 10 101111 101 10 11111 110110001 100010 11111 111101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 392
Words 79
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 304
Words per stanza (avg) 73
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Written on November 17, 2023

Submitted by mayaannviolette on December 15, 2023

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