Analysis of Grace Jennings Carmicheal

Henry Lawson 1867 (Grenfell) – 1922 (Sydney)



I hate the pen, the foolscap fair,
The poet’s corner, and the page,
For Grief and Death are written there,
In every land and every age.
The poets sing and play their parts,
Their daring cheers, their humour shines,
But, ah! my friends! their broken hearts
Have writ in blood between the lines.
They fought to build a Commonwealth,
They write for women and for men,
They give their youth, we give their health
And never prostitute the pen.
Their work in other tongues is read,
And when sad years wear out the pen,
Then they may seek their happy dead
Or go and starve in exile then.

A grudging meed of praise you give,
Or, your excuse, the ready lie—
(O! God, you don’t know how they live!
O! God, you don’t know how they die!)
The poetess, whose gentle tone
Oft cheered your mothers’ hearts when down;
A lonely woman, fought alone
The bitter fight in London town.

Your rich to lilac lands resort,
And old-world luxuries they buy;
You pour out gold to Cant and Sport
And give a million to a lie.
You give to cheats who rant and rave
With eyes that glare and arms that whirl,
But not a penny that might save
The children of the Gippsland girl.


Scheme ABABCDCDEFEFGFGF XHXHIJIJ KHKHLMLM
Poetic Form
Metre 1101011 01010001 11011101 0100101001 01010111 1101111 11111101 11010101 1111010 11110011 11111111 0101001 11010111 01111101 11111101 1101011 01011111 11010101 11111111 11111111 011101 11110111 01010101 01010101 1111101 01110011 11111101 01010101 11111101 11110111 11010111 0101011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,130
Words 218
Sentences 14
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 16, 8, 8
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 293
Words per stanza (avg) 72
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Henry Lawson

Henry Lawson 17 June 1867 - 2 September 1922 was an Australian writer and poet Along with his contemporary Banjo Paterson Lawson is among the best-known Australian poets and fiction writers of the colonial period more…

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