Analysis of Here's Luck

Henry Lawson 1867 (Grenfell) – 1922 (Sydney)



Old Time is tramping close to-day—you hear his bluchers fall,
A mighty change is on the way, an’ God protect us all;
Some dust’ll fly from beery coats—at least it’s been declared.
I’m glad that wimin has the votes—but just a trifle scared.
I’m just a trifle scared—For why? The wimin mean to rule;
It makes me feel like days gone by when I was caned at school.
The days of men is nearly dead—of double moons and stars—
They’ll soon put out our pipes, ’tis said, an’ close the public bars.

No more we’ll take a glass of ale when pushed with care an’ strife,
An’chuckle home with that old tale we used to tell the wife.
We’ll laugh an’joke an’ sing no more with jolly beery chums,
An’ shout ‘Here’s luck!’ while waitin’ for the luck that never comes.

Did we prohibit swillin’ tea clean out of common-sense
Or legislate on gossipin’ across a backyard fence?
Did we prohibit bustles—or the hoops when they was here?
The wimin never think of this—they want to stop our beer.

The track o’ life is dry enough, an’ crossed with many a rut,
But, oh! we’ll find it long an’ rough when all the pubs is shut,
When all the pubs is shut, an’ gone the doors we used to seek,
An’ we go toilin’, thirstin’ on through Sundays all the week.

For since the days when pubs was ‘inns’—in years gone past’n’ far—
Poor sinful souls have drowned their sins an’ sorrers at the bar;
An’ though at times it led to crimes, an’ debt, and such complaints—
I scarce dare think about the time when all mankind is saints.

’Twould make the bones of Bacchus leap an’ break his coffin lid;
And Burns’s ghost would wail an’ weep as Bobby never did.
But let the preachers preach in style, an’ rave and rant—’n’ buck,
I rather guess they’ll hear awhile the old war-cry: ‘Here’s Luck!’

The world might wobble round the sun, an’ all the banks go bung,
But pipes’ll smoke an’ liquor run while Auld Lang Syne is sung.
While men are driven through the mill, an’ flinty times is struck,
They’ll find a private entrance still! Here’s Luck, old man—Here’s Luck!


Scheme AABBCCDD EEFF GGXX HHII JJKK LLMM NNMM
Poetic Form
Metre 1111011111111 01011101110111 1111101111101 1111101110101 1101011101111 11111111111111 01111101110101 111110111110101 11110111111111 111111111101 1111111110101 1111111011101 1101011111101 1101101011 1101011011111 01101111111101 011111011111001 11111111110111 11011111011111 11111111101 1101111101111 1101111111101 11111111110101 11110101111111 11011101111101 0111111110101 11010101110111 11011101011111 01110101110111 1111101111111 11110101110111 11010101111111
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 2,130
Words 378
Sentences 20
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 8, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 48
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 218
Words per stanza (avg) 53
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Henry Lawson

Henry Lawson 17 June 1867 - 2 September 1922 was an Australian writer and poet Along with his contemporary Banjo Paterson Lawson is among the best-known Australian poets and fiction writers of the colonial period more…

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