Analysis of The Brothers



As Frozen winter approaches.

A Rounded red man sits in candlelight.

Bounded leather, the lists placed with care.

The words inscribed read Naughty and Nice,

As the warmth of the room disappears into darkness,

The air so icy frozen all around him.

With hooves that clop and teeth so sharp,

His brother did appear.

Smashing a bauble upon the hardened floor.

“Hello there Brother.” The goat said gleefully.

“What a pleasure it is.”

“Krampus.” Says Nick rolling his eyes in the back of his head.

“We meet again. This time of year creeps up on us once more.”

The goat continued to say, “12 months come and gone away.”

“Even that feels too soon to see you.” Nick did groan.

Krampus reached for the list written in ink

To inspect what he could see.

“Every year there are less and less.” He noticed while tutting.

“The world is disgusting full of humans wanting chaos, why is it that there is still more good in here?”

“You underestimate them dear brother.” Saint Nick said surely.

Krampus smiled, glistening teeth glowing then spoke deeper than he had before.

“I think you cheat, no one knows what you’re really like. Underneath this jolly exterior you are as despicable as I.”

Nick stared down his glasses, and cleared his throat from mucus.

“Be gone now brother, for your time here is over.”

Moments before the old goat did leave,

Staring into his brother’s deep soul muttering to himself.

“You disguise it well, a wolf in sheep’s clothing, but one day they will discover who you truly are.”

Into the frozen darkness, the demon left silently,

And Nick did utter “I have no doubts they will my twin brother.”


Scheme X X X X A X X X B C X X B X X D C D X C B X A E X X X C E
Poetic Form
Metre 11010010 010111010 101001111 010111001 101101010110 01110101011 11110111 110101 10010010101 01110011100 101011 1111011001111 11011111111111 0101011110101 101111111111 111011001 1011111 10011110111011 0110101110101011111111101 11010111011110 11100110111011101 111111111101011100100111010011 1111100111110 111101111110 100101111 100111011100101 101110101101111101011101 01010100101100 011101111111110
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,715
Words 354
Sentences 31
Stanzas 29
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 43
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 43
Words per stanza (avg) 10

About this poem

An alternative retelling of christmas between Saint Nick and Krampus told in a fun way.

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Written on December 09, 2023

Submitted by bethbutler74 on December 27, 2023

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Elizabeth Butler

Elizabeth Butler is a disabled writer with a masters in Creative Writing at Edge Hill University. She has published an anthology, Turning the Tide which was a collaboration through Writing On the Wall. She has published a short children's stories online and has published a book of poetry through Bookleaf Publishing and self published through a second poetry collection Amazon and has achieved third place in a short story competition held within her town. She has performed her poetry at events and theatres around her hometown. more…

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