Analysis of Promise Me...



You will never be to old
To cuddle me so closely

When you see me
getting up in age
Your patience and
smile will not change...

Promise Me...
When my time to leave you
Arrive that your tender eyes
Will meet my eyes
As they will be closing
While saying....

Until we meet again...


Scheme XA AXXX AXBBCC X
Poetic Form
Metre 1110111 1101110 1111 10101 1100 1111 101 111111 0111101 1111 111110 110 011101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 311
Words 69
Sentences 6
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 2, 4, 6, 1
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 53
Words per stanza (avg) 14

About this poem

I wrote this poem looking at my kids growing up and feeling my years adding to time...

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Written on December 27, 2023

Submitted by k.kalmanowitz on December 27, 2023

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Dr. Karmie Kalmanowitz

I have 4 awesome children who are everything to me and they gave me nine awesome grandchildren and soon I will be a great grandma which is the thrill of my life... I enjoy writing in the moment what comes to mind. more…

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