Analysis of Success

Henry Lawson 1867 (Grenfell) – 1922 (Sydney)



Did you see that man riding past,
With shoulders bowed with care?
There’s failure in his eyes to last,
And in his heart despair.
He seldom looks to left or right,
He nods, but speaks to none,
And he’s a man who fought the fight—
God knows how hard!—and won.
No great “review” could rouse him now,
No printed lies could sting;
No kindness smooth his knitted brow,
Nor wrong one new line bring.
Through dull, dumb days and brooding nights,
From years of storm and stress,
He’s riding down from lonely heights—
The Mountains of Success.

He sees across the darkening land
The graveyards on the coasts;
He sees the broken columns stand
Like cold and bitter ghosts;
His world is dead while yet he lives,
Though known in continents;
His camp is where his country gives
Its pauper monuments.


Scheme ABABCDCDEFEFGHGH IJIJKLKL
Poetic Form Traditional rhyme
Metre 11111101 110111 11001111 001101 11011111 111111 01011101 111101 1111111 110111 11011101 111111 11110101 111101 11011101 010101 110101001 01101 11010101 110101 11111111 110100 11111101 110100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 786
Words 144
Sentences 8
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 16, 8
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 307
Words per stanza (avg) 71
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Henry Lawson

Henry Lawson 17 June 1867 - 2 September 1922 was an Australian writer and poet Along with his contemporary Banjo Paterson Lawson is among the best-known Australian poets and fiction writers of the colonial period more…

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